I made this song because I wanted to try making more modern techno music. I've already made a techno song before with "MARINE WASTE" from BOFU2016, however that is old-school techno. I wanted to try something new.
The song ended up sounding like a mix between techno and trance, so the genre "Tech-Trance" was born.
The feel of the song is something like a construction. Something being manufactured. Production. And so on.
Huge thanks to 自動車原付 for creating the movie for this song. It looks awesome and reflects the feeling of the song really well!
Bonus: I have included 6KEYS patterns with this BMS! Check them out!
무난하지만 깔끔하게 완성된 느낌을 받았습니다. 다만 테크트랜스라기에는 살짝 어중간하게 들리고 아예 강한 테크댄스로 나가는 편도 나쁘지 않았을까 싶습니다.
6K 패턴은 bmson/bmnuse같은 느낌을 받아서 제법 독특했습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다.
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:42:43
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Thanks a lot for your impression!! :)
90PTS
usamin
2017-03-27 05:28:29
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no comment impression.
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:41:52
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Thank you for your comment.
93PTS
ion_tracker
2017-03-26 19:54:50
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패턴에서 나온 롱잡이 인상깊은 작품입니다. BGA에서는 정사각형의 매력을 잘 뽐내 주었네요. 멋집니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다.
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:41:46
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Thank you for your comment!!
90PTS
Yuki.
2017-03-26 18:51:22
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좋아요! 6키라니 신선하네요
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:41:26
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6KEYS is love~~.
Thanks for your impression!
87PTS
anonymous
2017-03-26 16:52:18
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umm...little bored..i think.
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:40:58
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Thank you for your comment. orz
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0samil0
2017-03-26 03:53:00
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Oops...
I really played & enjoyed your work! Great job!
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:40:23
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Huge thanks for your detailed comment!!
I will take everything you said into consideration for my next BMS work.
It seems the combination of longnote and scratch was a "hit or miss" scenario. Some people liked it, some people didn't.
I'll try to work harder on sound emphasis next time too.
Thanks greatly!!
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0samil0
2017-03-26 03:52:46
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- There were some points where the sounds what the notes represent are not clear. For example, from #13, hi-hats were placed as playable notes in 6, 7K HARD or EXTREME, but it was hard to figure out since it was placed like a melody line in the game. It would be better if the sounds that were emphasized in each section were selected.
- Also, some notes did not match the tune of the instruments(higher notes may go right). As some long notes were used, I felt like that the mismatch was more noticeable.
- Scratches with long notes are quite disadvantageous for BM controller users. It would be better if you use those kind of notes as less as possible.
- The good point was that the patterns were prepared in many modes, including 6keys, so that many players can enjoy your work.
I real
75PTS
0samil0
2017-03-26 03:49:22
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Song: 30/35
BGA: 20/20
Pattern: 25/45
- Simple but neat & clean song. It was very good to enjoy relaxedly.
- The bass seems too loud regarding other sounds. You may lower the volume of the bass a little bit.
- Also I thought more stereo separation of the instruments may be helpful.
- The BGA was also simple and fairly fit to the song. I liked it.
66PTS
SHIE:L NARA
2017-03-25 21:59:32
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I think the technicly trace, but it is trance-core I think. And I think the BGA was simple because the music is simple.
Music 35/55
BGA 19/25
Realation Between Music-BGA 12/20
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:35:55
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Hm.. I don't think "trance-core" suits this song. Trance-core is Trance+Hardcore. Higher BPM would be required (around 170~200 BPM)
Thanks for your impression!
I played 7 keys HARD and EXTREME. Great music, patterns, and BGA! However, I would like to point few things out.
First, both patterns have some long notes that are difficult to play (e.g., long notes with scratches) It would be better if you took better consideration of using long notes.
Second, I thought the EXTREME was too easy for Lv.12, so Lv.11 should work.
Anyway, thank you for this great BMS!
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Dolphin
2017-03-27 23:31:34
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When making the patterns, I was very careful about LN placement + scratch placement. I received approval from a few people saying the longnotes did not disturb ability to hit scratch notes...
I wanted to make a pattern that is outside the comfort zone of IIDX (and BMS in general). I wanted to try something new. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it that much. orz
Thank you very much anyway! I'll try even harder next time.
Cool Rhythm, Nice Pattern.
I think the overall mood of this music reminds me of 'Latin likes' such as Latin Tech. So, I was very excited during Listening. However, Already Many impressions mentioned, the impact of highlight is needed.
Thank you for your nice work! I'm Glad to Meet neat BMS like Yours. :)
곡, 노트, 영상 모두 깔끔했는데, 플레이 후 '어 벌써 끝?'이라는 느낌이 먼저 들었습니다. 이미 많은 지적이 들어온 대로 임팩트가 아쉬웠기 때문이겠지요. 드럼을 더욱 묵직하게 하고 리드신스에 레이어를 덧입히고 LFO를 걸어서 생기를 더 살리면 좋겠습니다.
제작 수고하셨습니다.
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Thanks for your neat(not NEET) BMS.
Song, note and BGA are tidy but after the play, I felt 'Ah it's ended?' first. Already there are many advices, the spice for impact is needed. Massiv'er' DRUM and MORE layered and LFOed lead synth will be helpful.
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Dolphin
2017-03-10 08:21:25
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Thanks for your feedback! I will use your advice when I create my next song! <3
Unique style! You surely know how to make rhythm enjoyable. Sound was kinda oldschool(as described in comment) but also it made this song quite distinctive and memoriable.
I'm giving this score for shaking my shoulder 85 times while listening this music alone at soundcloud.
Thank you for your effort!
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독창적인 스타일이에요! 리듬타기를 어떻게 잘 살리는지 확실히 아시는 분이라니까요? 코멘트대로 사운드가 올드스쿨하긴 했지만 그거 나름대로 독특한 감상을 남기네요.
점수는 제가 사운드클라우드 링크를 들으며 어깨를 들썩거린 횟수로 드리기로 했어요
제작 수고하셨어요!
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Dolphin
2017-03-07 06:14:52
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate your kind words!
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Quree
2017-03-06 00:59:52
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너무 반복적이어서 조금 지루한 감이 없지 않아 있는 부분만 빼면 무난한 곡이라고 생각합니다.
깔끔한 BGA와 깔끔한 곡... 정말 깔끔합니다.
다만 아쉬웠던점은 임팩트가 많이 부족했습니다.
영상없이 곡만 들었을경우 곡이 너무 흘러가는듯한 느낌을 받았습니다..
구성을 조금만 더 채워서 약간의 인상을 더했더라면 괜찮았을듯 싶다는
개인적인 견해입니다.
패턴에대해선 지적할 부분은 없을듯 합니다.